Nowadays some people prefer staying single. What is your opinion?

Many people prefer being in couples because they believe that love can give them the happiness and make their live joyful.
On the other hand
, some people think that being single is much better, they can enjoy their
live
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life
lives
, having freedom, and have enough
time
for themselves. In my opinion, I would rather
being
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be
single. Single people tend to be more focus on their studies or their careers. They work hard to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their dreams and to become
success
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a success
. In order to do that they need to be calm, independent, and have no emotional effect. So that, they can focus and work hard to complete what they have to do without
much
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many
obstacles on their way to be successful. As a matter of
fact couples
Accept comma addition
fact, couples
need to
care
for each others, spend
time
together, look after each others, and
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
they pick up a fight. You can't always do whatever you want or go wherever you want to go because someone is
worry
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worried
about you and you have
ask
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asked
permission from partner.
However
, you don't need to
care
about all those things, as long as you're single. You have your freedom and no one is on your way to go out and do what you want to do except your parents.
Futhermore
in addition
Furthermore
, you can spend your free
time
with your family and take good
care
of your parents. Yet, if you live with your
patner
a person's partner in marriage
partner
or have a partner, you will have less
time
to spend with your family. You need to take
care
of yourself, your love
,
Accept space
,
and
also
your family. Indeed, you are having a big
responsible
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responsibility
. In conclusion, to live a wonderful and free lifestyle, staying single is the best option. Overall, you can have much free
time
for yourself to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
your goal and
also
can spend
time
with family.
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