You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this. What activities you have planned When the first meeting takes place and where.

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Dear

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or Madam, I am writing to you to request to publish an advertisement in your local newspaper regarding a public meeting that I am going to organise next weekend. As you are well aware

that

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in our town people come from different communities to live here.

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it is essential to make a small club where people come from different cultures

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and

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share their experiences with each other to build a healthy society. I started a club named '

lions club

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' 2 months back and now I

planned

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to organise a

get together

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in Mohali community hall phase 11 on 7th May at 11.a.m. We shall be touching upon various social issues like

environment

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environmental

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pollution, child amusement and recycling. A short lecture will be delivered by an expert and the best part of

meeting

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the meeting

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is that if anyone from

audience

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the audience

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want

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to share their thoughts come and join the stage and

also

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asks

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questions from the experts. My team doing very hard work

on making

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to make

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this

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event successful. I hope you

would

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will

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publish

this

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advert

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your esteemed local newspaper on coming Sunday. Yours faithfully, John smith

Tue Apr 28 2020

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coherence and cohesion

Consider breaking up some of the longer sentences for better readability. This will help improve the overall clarity of your writing.

task achievement

Make sure to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual phrases such as 'doing very hard work'. A more formal phrasing would enhance the overall tone of your request.

task achievement

The letter has a clear purpose and it is appropriately addressed to the editor.

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You included relevant details about the event, such as the date, time, and location, which is essential for a successful communication.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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