You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this. What activities you have planned When the first meeting takes place and where.

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Dear
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or Madam, I am writing to you to request to publish an advertisement in your local newspaper regarding a public meeting that I am going to organise next weekend. As you are well aware
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in our town people come from different communities to live here.
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it is essential to make a small club where people come from different cultures
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and
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share their experiences with each other to build a healthy society. I started a club named '
lions club
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' 2 months back and now I
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to organise a
get together
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in Mohali community hall phase 11 on 7th May at 11.a.m. We shall be touching upon various social issues like
environment
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environmental
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pollution, child amusement and recycling. A short lecture will be delivered by an expert and the best part of
meeting
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the meeting
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is that if anyone from
audience
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the audience
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want
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to share their thoughts come and join the stage and
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asks
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questions from the experts. My team doing very hard work
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this
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event successful. I hope you
would
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publish
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advert
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your esteemed local newspaper on coming Sunday. Yours faithfully, John smith

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking up some of the longer sentences for better readability. This will help improve the overall clarity of your writing.
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Make sure to maintain a formal tone throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual phrases such as 'doing very hard work'. A more formal phrasing would enhance the overall tone of your request.
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The letter has a clear purpose and it is appropriately addressed to the editor.
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You included relevant details about the event, such as the date, time, and location, which is essential for a successful communication.
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