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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graph demonstrates how the climate changed throughout the 12 months in Kolkata, as well as the precipitation. Overall, the city's average monthly condition was the highest in May, while July was the rainiest month;
however
, the heat and the rain were not synchronized. The climate was fairly high at the beginning of the year; it stood exactly at 20 degrees Celsius. The graph experienced a gradual decrease in the following periods, reaching the highest rate by May at roughly 32 degrees. Following the spring months,
although
 it was constant through August and September, after which it respectively decreased and fell back to nearly the starting rate. Interestingly, the winter as well as the spring periods barely had any rainfall, unlike the summer and fall months. The amount of rain Kolkata had significantly climbed from January, all the way until July, when it reached approximately 340 millimetres, which was, in fact, the highest of all. .
Although
, after that, a constant reduction was noticeable. The precipitation gradually dropped and reached its lowest by December, nearly 0 millimetres of rainfall.

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