The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.

The given diagrams depict the information about the steps and equipment used in the cement - making process and
process of concrete production of the cement. Overall, for the adhesive manufacture there are 4 steps like, crushing, mixing, heating, grinding whereas, for the concrete construction there is only one process where all ingredients are added to the concrete food processor.
of all, the major ingredient for the plaster manufacture is limestone and clay and these products are crushed to form its powder. The
step is,
powder is added to blender machine where it mixes and move forward to rotating heater. After heating the mixture, it passes to grinder machine to chop and grind in tiny pieces and
adhesive is formed.
sand is packed in bags.
of all, sand is used in concrete management.
, 15% of adhesive and 10% of water is added to the concrete mixer.
In addition
to these, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel is added to the mixer.
food processor will mix all basic material to form concrete which is used for building purposes.
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