The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the processes of making
house
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warm or cool with various design principles.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the shapes of the
roof
of warm and cool
climate
houses differ
with
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each other and
heat
storage building
material
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materials
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and insulation are necessary for living in a cool
climate
.
Moreover
, the warm
climate
house
has different design principles during the day and night. In the cool
climate
, the
house
is covered with
heat
storage building materials
while
insulation is
also
important for reducing
heat
loss. The
roof
of the
house
should be high-angled when thermal building material exists in
the
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all corners of the window. The cool
climate
house
has one window which faces
with
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the direction of the sun
The insulation
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is
also
crucial
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element in the warm
climate
with reflective
roof
material for the
house
. It is important to add
roof
overhangs for shade. The
two sided
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windows should be closed and covered during the day
although
they should be open
in
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the
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night for ventilation and
removing
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stored
heat
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • thermal mass
  • insulation
  • ventilation
  • draft
  • heat dissipation
  • exposure to sunlight
  • extended eaves
  • overhangs
  • reflective materials
  • south-facing
  • north-facing
  • porches
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