The diagrams below show some principles of house design for cool and for warm climates. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture illustrates the processes of making
house
warm or cool with various design principles.
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a house
Overall
, it is clear that
the shapes of the roof
of warm and cool climate
houses differ with
each other and Change preposition
from
heat
storage building material
and insulation are necessary for living in a cool Fix the agreement mistake
materials
climate
. Moreover
, the warm climate
house
has different design principles during the day and night.
In the cool climate
, the house
is covered with heat
storage building materials while
insulation is also
important for reducing heat
loss. The roof
of the house
should be high-angled when thermal building material exists in the
all corners of the window. The cool Remove the article
apply
climate
house
has one window which faces with
the direction of the sun
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apply
The insulation
is Correct article usage
Insulation
also
crucial
element in the warm Add an article
a crucial
climate
with reflective roof
material for the house
. It is important to add roof
overhangs for shade. The two sided
windows should be closed and covered during the day Add a hyphen
two-sided
although
they should be open in
Change preposition
at
the
night for ventilation and Correct article usage
apply
removing
stored Change the verb form
to remove
heat
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