Analyze Biti’s strategies to meet the demand of Chinese consumers

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Biti’s
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Bites
has established
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have established
a branch on the border between Vietnam and China to explore consumer tastes. They cooperate with Chinese traders because each distributor here will know how to choose the right market area for them. When
biti’s
maintain with or as if with a bet
bets
deals with Chinese merchants, they always show fairness and orthodox views.
Therefore
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,
this
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has made Chinese traders more respectful for the long-term stability of the cooperative relationship. When entering the Chinese market, Biti’s is actively opening agents to sell goods and participating in fairs to promote the brand.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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