People who live in a city lack a sense of communication, even they do not know their neighbor . why is this case? Is it important to have good relationship with neighbor

In my
view there
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view, there
was
strong relationship
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a strong relationship
at
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of
old
time
. Everyone knows
this
that, there are
good
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better
communicate
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communicated
communicating
in the villages. We have the best communicate with our
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
in
village
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the village
.
However in
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However, in
Baku we do not know majority our
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. When we moved here we know just one. And
time
was
passing we
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passing, we
realized other of
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
. Close
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
is better than far relative.
Esential
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Essential
Essentials
is that can be
jealous
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a jealous neighbour
jealous neighbour
neighbor
too sometime they be as evil. I do not agree with
this
opinion, there is feeble
communicait
transmit information
communicate
communicated
communicates
in a
city
,
in
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with
city
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the city
may be the best relationship too. My aunt has the best
neigbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
neighbour
in
city
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the city
cities
a city
. I
love
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
live
their
in or at that place
there
too. They always come to each other. When I was going home my
aunt I
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aunt, I
was always going to her
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
too. In shot in
city
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the city
a city
can be good communication and
can not
can not
cannot
be. But in village relationship become by far the best because they know better each other.
For
example who
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example, who
is they? In my village I have good
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
.
A
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At
one
time
I
was mount
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mounted
to their tree for pluck
apple but
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an apple, but
an apple but
the apple but
do not realise it. We were going to walk
for
to a considerable degree; very much
far
with girls. We have been spending good
time
. In
city
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the city
cities
it is possible. When in was in
baku
a port city on the Caspian Sea that is the capital of Azerbaijan and an important center for oil production
Baku
. I was
metting
a formally arranged gathering
meeting
melting
knitting
with
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
my aunt.
First
at
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of
all to my mind
neighbor
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbour
communicate is prominent. It does not matter in urban or in rural.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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