The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

We see the graph below that summarizes the proportion of 65+ ages (say, elderly in short) in

general

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population between three different countries beginning from the

1940’s

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1940s

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and up to

2040’s

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.

USA

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showed with a black line, Sweden

,

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showed with Green and Japan with the red one. When we look at the graph we see that in the early years of twenty

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centuries

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the percentage of elderly people close

between

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each country,

ranged

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between five to ten

percentages

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per cent

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.

At the end

of the

sixties

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there is a trend to increase

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this

proportion

at

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USA

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and Sweden

while

Japan seems

contrast

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of

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it.

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continues till

80s

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for those two countries, Japan continues

on

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almost the same range (between less than 5

percentages

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to

near

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10) through

the

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2020. Another stroke seems for the USA at the beginning of

2020’s

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2020s

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After

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2020 to 2040 all

of

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three countries’

population

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populations

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of

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65+ aged regularly

increasing

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, too.