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All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.

#education #people #government
Education
 is one of the most essential
thing
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things
 that
society
 needs presently as it plays
important role
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an important role
 in
growth
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the growth
 of
individual
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the individual
an individual
individuals
. Making
education
 free for the
society
 is
very big step
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a very big step
 for the government as the population is
continuous
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continuously
 increasing. I partially agree with the above mentioned ideology for which reasons will be discussed in subsequent paragraphs. One side of the aspect, it is the right of every
citizens
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citizen
 to get sufficient
education
 services in primary and secondary level to educate themselves and make a change in
society
 in a positive way. Ruling authority collect taxes
form
a giver or sender
from
 every person who is earning and
then
this
 money is used for the public in
many manner
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many manners
,
such
 as
education
,
healthcare
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health care
 basically for the overall development of the
society
 and citizens.
On the other
hand of
Accept comma addition
hand, of
 the aspect, it is undoubtedly true that
education
 is one of the most important among all
such
 as towards infrastructure, healthcare, medical and security.
Moreover
, there are many people who cannot afford
education
 because of lack of funds and resources. In that case, it is the responsibility of government to provide free
education
 or scholarships for
such
 students who wants to study and grow, those who will bring change in the
society
 because they are the future of the country. It can be concluded that, in my opinion, it is a responsibility of top authorities to educate public for basic
education
 and just like food, shelter and home as
an
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a
 basic need
education
 is essential for very individual.
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