Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that
universitie
subjects should have the same amount of women and men. With the body of faculty and students at a university
university
this
idea probably the world could be more equal, due to both genders would have the same opportunities to obtain knowledge. However
, in my view, this
though is utopic for the reason that male and female have differents
abilities, which should have used according what is easier for them.
If colleges force to unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
incorpore
more women in careers related make into a whole or make part of a whole
incorporate
with
math or science, the world likely would change, because the “Suggestion
to
weak
sex” would have more chance to show their abilities in Suggestion
weaker
this
fiels
. a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
field
This
has as a consequence a fair planet, for the reason that femenine
sex associated with women and not with men
feminine
had not have
an equal participation through of years. Suggestion
had not had
Hence
, this
would be a great opportunity for give
back all lost years, Suggestion
giving
therefore
, is a way to do justice.
However
, many studies show that the abilities between a man and a woman are differents
. With unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
this
I don’t want to say that one gender is better than other
, only I’m expressing that their skills have been any of various alternatives; some other
another
giving according their
role in the survive. Suggestion
given according to their
given according their
For example
, women are better in empathy and comprehension, so they would be higher in professions in the health area. On the other hand
, men are more calculated and good with numbers, then
they could work better in careers such
as engineers and maths.
In conclusion, I understand that the world want
to be more equal for female, so for Suggestion
wants
this
cause some persons want to in every area is divide
between a Suggestion
divided
women
and Suggestion
woman
a men
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amen
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my opinion Accept comma addition
However, in
this
idea is quite utopic, for the fact that both sexs
have different skills, which is Suggestion
sexes
demostrate
with many scientific studies.Suggestion
demonstrated
demonstrate
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