The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart compares the proportion of households
with
owning and renting Change preposition
apply
accommodation
between two countries, namely; England and Whales since
1918 to 2011.
Change preposition
from
Overall
, rental housing shows upward
trend in the first half of the year Add an article
an upward
the upward
while
it exceeds by
housing ownership over the Change preposition
apply
last
years. Both of these are shown equilibrium
in 1971.
At the start of the period leased houses Change preposition
as equilibrium
was
highest around 75% of total households. Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Then
, it was
Unnecessary verb
apply
leveled
off at just Change the spelling
levelled
fewer
than 70% between 1939 and 1953. It Correct quantifier usage
less
was
declined modestly to around 80% in 1961. In 1971, both of these accommodations Unnecessary verb
apply
were
remained equal at 50%. Unnecessary verb
apply
After
this
, it was
gradually decreased over the Unnecessary verb
apply
next
two decades. And at the end
of 2011
the leased Add a comma
,2011
accommodation
was a minimal increase by a small fraction.
Ownership of housing was at the
lowest in 1918 around just over 20%. Owned Change the word
its
accommodation
was
remained constant nearly at 30% in the almost Unnecessary verb
apply
next
one and half
Correct article usage
a half
decade
. Fix the agreement mistake
decades
However
, after stability in owned and rented accommodation
in 1971, the
rented Correct article usage
apply
accommodation
had a gradual fall as compared to owning accommodation
. It is
ended up close to 30% Unnecessary verb
apply
at the end
of the period in 2011.Submitted by hiraqayyum711 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words accommodation with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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