You have traveled by air had an unpleasant flight. Write a letter to the airline company Manager about the following: - Describe the flight - Explain what was the problem - ask how this issue can be solved

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

complaint letter because of

dissatisfactory

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the dissatisfactory

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service offered during my recent travel visit. Let me explain in more detail. I travelled by Jet airways 9W 6 on 8th September 2018. I usually prefer

this

airline, as I am a platinum member and due to

courteous

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the courteous

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service offered by the staff. When I boarded the plane, the crew informed

that

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me that

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I am being upgraded to business class from economy class. I was very happy with

this

special gesture. But after few minutes, one of the cabin crew members approached me and informed

that

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me that

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they had some misconception in the name and seat which was offered to me belongs to

other person

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another person

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. I shifted to my original seat which was mentioned on

boarding

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the boarding

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pass. During Breakfast, the food served was cold and salty. I complained about the meal to the flight attendant, but he didn't

responded

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in a proper way. I would like to suggest some measures to avoid

this problems

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this problem

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. I would request you to give proper training to the staff and ask them to

cross check

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the name of the customer

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apply

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if they are upgrading someone. I would

also

suggest you

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apply

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look towards the quality of food served during travel. I hope you would look into

this

matter and take corrective measures against it. Yours faithfully, Tim Frank

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

226 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

unpleasant experience
inconvenience
unsatisfactory service
flight details
boarding process
cabin crew
in-flight amenities
discomfort
resolution
compensation
refund
sincere apology
customer satisfaction
travel experience

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