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Now a days, celebrities earn more money than political personalities? Is it positive or negative development?

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In Present scenario, the stars shining in the sky of
film
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the film world
world
 in comparison to political leaders are earning a big fortune.
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 of reasons are attributing to
this
 growing trend.
This
 development shows the current trend which unveils
new dimension
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new dimensions
a new dimension
 of
this
world
. There are a number of reasons leading people in
showbiz industry
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the showbiz industry
 earning good remuneration. The
first
 and foremost reason is people's fascination towards film
world
, which confer heavenly title on them.
Secondly
, movie stars have started winning accolades from every quarter of the
world whereas
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world, whereas
 the popularity of political personalities is confined to their respective place only.
Thirdly
,
considerable number
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a considerable number
considerable numbers
 of youngsters
emulates
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emulate
 the outfits and lifestyle of celebrities and wishes to opt the same discipline as their future career.
However
, today’s generation is not inclined towards becoming political leaders as it is deemed as a murky place where parties sling mud at each other. These reasons make their profession less attractive.
This
 growing trend does not seem
positive but
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positive, but
 not fair and square. Giving precedence to
film profession
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the film profession
 discourage
forthcoming generation
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the forthcoming generation
.
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.
o
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O
 usher in
this
 industry.
Therefore
 the need of the hour is to give equal weight to all professions from all walks of life. Keeping all the facts in mind, all occupation should be given equal importance and salary is the motivating factor which should be given according to the capabilities and skills, not ion the basis of popularity,
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