Some people leave their hometown to work in other places. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is often argued that the migration indicates some social issues nowadays. Some people might think that the number of inhabitants

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their hometown to other big cities for business. In my opinion, I personally think that the cons of

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issue outweigh the pros.

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essay will address the perspective of people’s migration that affects the community.

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of all, the destruction of

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economy

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the economy

an economy

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in the society would happen. When young people leave to work

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other cities, only elderly people might be left in their

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hometown, then

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problem leads the

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problem leads to the

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population

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such

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as the countryside.

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, comparing

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large cities, the

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between the cities are totally different because

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people cannot afford to grow up their social

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.

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, the unbalanced

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of the town would be worse because the majority of young people move out to another city.

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, the environment of the places might be deteriorated when too many individuals settle down.

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, the

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monopoly of the metro cities causes the environmental issues due to some congestion.

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, when a city has lots of people, they tend to use their vehicles so much which affects the traffic jam on the road and

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the creation of emission gas may harm the air.

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, the environment of the city might be polluted.

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, people might have a change to make their life better. In spite of the fact that there are many problems exist

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opportunity to earn a lot of money because some of big cities provide inhabitants to have a variety of jobs.

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, their lifestyle will be improved from the plentiful opportunities to have jobs. In conclusion, it is a good phenomenon when it comes to migrating to other cities to have a job.

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, we need to encourage people to stay their hometown to maintain equal

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and the local

economy

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.