Some e[perts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school . Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

A part of scientists assume that better time to start learning foreign language at
age
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the age
of 7
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This
essay will be discussed pros and cons of learning another language at primary
school
. I consider that begin learning languages at
young
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younger
years has more advantages
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Learning
language
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a language
at primary
school
has some advantages and disadvantages.
First
of all learning languages to force children"s brain to work better, it improves their memory. For
example during
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example, during
the time of learning languages our mind to
engages
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engage
a new part of our brain, A
consequently
our memory became better and better. It is good because improvements of children"s memory will help them with studies in
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
sphere
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Second
advantages
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are
a lot of companies need
person
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people
a person
who knows foreign languages especially international
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To be
multilingual person
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a multilingual person
gives opportunities for
children future
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the child's future
child's future
a child's future
children's future
.
For
example for
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example, for
person
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the person
a person
who knows a lot of different languages it will be easy to apply for a job
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Learning
foreign
languages
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languages has also
also
has disadvantages. A huge disadvantage is some children can be confused
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with
learning two languages at the same time
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Because at primary
school
a child
only start
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only starts
to get a knowledge
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,
start to learn his native languages and it will be hard for them to learn two languages together
in addition
languages has
different rule
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different rules
a different rule
and of course words. To
summing
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sum
up how we can see
advantages
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the advantages
outweigh disadvantages. I think it is good if a child will start
learnind
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
foreign languages at primary
school
because it can help him in the future.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cognitive development
  • pronunciation
  • accent
  • cultural awareness
  • proficiency
  • open-mindedness
  • social harmony
  • academic benefits
  • stress
  • confusion
  • qualified teachers
  • curriculum
  • teaching materials
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