2019-12-07: Task 1 You went on a trip and found that the guide was really helpful. Write a letter to the tour company manager. In your letter, you should: • describe the tour • tell what you liked about the tour guide • recommend manager ways/methods to appreciate the tour guide
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter regarding my review for a trip to Agra, India, on the 20th of April 2020, which was managed by your company.
The tour was about the Jewels of India. Moreover
, it was a two day trip to Agra which included accommodation and visiting several tourist sites in the city, one of the sites was the Taj Mahal and the Red Fort which were marvellous. Later on, we were taken to the most high-spirited areas in Delhi, for instance
, Connaught street, which is in the heart of the city and is notable for food and shopping. Additionally
, there was a tour-bus
as well, which took us around the city.
The sole reason for Correct your spelling
tour bus
this
trip to be memorable was because of our guide. He was knowledgeable and patient throughout the journey. Furthermore
, he was nonchalant in answering our numerous questions. Nevertheless
, he also
shared stories about various rulers inhabitable in the region. In addition
to this
, he also
suggested some scrumptious food items as well as some traditional clothing stores. Overall the tour was indelible because of him.
In my opinion, that individual desires some extra credit for his hard work and dedication. If I may, I would like to give some suggestions to appreciate his efforts, for example
, adding an option of tipping the tour guide in the total cost. All in all, I would recommend your company, especially the chaperon as well to my friends and families.
Thanking you.
Yours sincerely,
Shakib QureshiSubmitted by tasbeauty.nature on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
