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promotion of Fahad Mohammad as Unit Quality Lead for AC Systems UAE reporting directly to me, effective May 2020

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I am pleased to announce the promotion of
Fahad
 Mohammad as
Unit
Quality
 Lead for AC Systems UAE reporting directly to me, effective May 2020
Fahad
 has been with our company since
last
 9 years. Over these 9 years,
Fahad
 has held the positions of
Quality
 Engineer,
Quality
 Coordinator, Project
Quality
 Manager and
Quality
 Lead in Saudi Arabia.
Fahad
 performance in
Quality
 has been influential for GE record of customer relation, problem solving,
and handling management
Suggestion
handling and management
 responsibilities.
Fahad
 is known for his ability to be a team player and overcome problems during challenging times he has always shown initiative in the performance of his duties, even going above and beyond what is expected of him, in order to ensure that Projects delivers
quality
 customer service while producing the expected outputs. We expect
this
 same level of dedication and commitment to be applied in his new position. As a
Unit
Quality
 Lead,
Fahad
 will be more closely involved in establishing, maintaining and verifying the implementation of
quality
 system and
plans ensuring
Accept comma addition
plans, ensuring
 that the contractual, legal and internal requirements are met,
also
 being responsible for coordinating and reporting on the project
quality
 activities and on the related
quality
 interfaces, maintaining client and project team liaison and communication on
quality
 related issues. The
quality
 of dedication and customer satisfaction is very important for the company's long-term success. We look forward to
Fahad
’s ability to achieve his targets in his new role as
Unit
Quality
 Lead. Please join us in welcoming
Fahad
 as a
Unit
Quality
 Lead for AC Systems UAE and congratulating him on his promotion. Congratulations,
Fahad
.
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