Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier stage. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that having a fixed retirement

age

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for all occupations are unfair because some profession be supposed to pension at a prior stage.

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, others said that the equality principle must be adopted

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in

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case. I personally believe that the superannuated

age

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must be set particularly for every position.

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, some vocation

need

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needs

rigorous physical stamina for completing

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job.

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, higher target

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waiting

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for

all of the

employee

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employees

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of

longer

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long

hours activity, which is

quit

to a degree (not used with a negative)

quite

difficult to be repeated

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at

the older

age

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.

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, I have a counterpart in Pertamina who does not have sufficient stamina

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to

complete all of the job precisely. Undoubtedly, seniors always related to easily

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infect

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with

some disease due to no longer have good antibody.

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, superannuated

age

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will be useful to adopt for every position because some of the employee lost their strength after worked for more than 20 years.

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, work

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not only involving

physical, but

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mental and

concentration

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. Some

profession

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profession, such

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as driver, air trafficking and miners need excessive

concentration

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. Obviously,

driver

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the driver

need

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needs

some

concentration

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because the situation in the network of roads can change dramatically. Generally, air trafficking

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also need

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also needs

adequate

concentration

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as a

consequent

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consequence

of the job which occur real time. Particularly, miners

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need good mentality because live in rural areas is full of unexpected difficulty. Due to the reasons above, I think all the retirement

age

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must be classified based on the profession. In conclusion, there are some certain occupation which

need

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needs

more energy

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of the need of physical, mental and

concentration

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. I personally agree that set the pension

years regardless

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years, regardless

of employment is unfair.