The chart below shows information about Heart Attacks by Age and Gender in USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. • You should •

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cardiac arrests in the USA per year, all

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and females of different

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are divided into three categories, 29-44, 45-64, and 65 and above.

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, more men of all

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are the sufferer of heart attacks in America as compared to

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. The most prone age group is seniors in their mid-sixties,

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adults until

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are at the least risk of

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, especially

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the bar graph, 440

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men get a cardiac attack at the age of 65 and more,

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are a little lower in number with 374

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the same age group.

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range from 45 to 64; the substantial amount of

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is almost equally at risk as category 65+, with 424

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,

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merely 136

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women

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are encountering

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issue.

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29 to 44, people lying in

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range are less vulnerable to

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disease, mainly females are negligible as compared to

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with only 3000,

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are significantly high in number with 123

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.