The youth in many countries are unemployed and unskilled, while at the same time, the military services are in need of people. Compulsory military service is beneficial and necessary. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is known that there is the lack of people in the army all over the world.
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young people are not employed or are not busy at universities or high school, the are not conscripted even it is thought to be compulsory and advantageous. I totally disagree with the opinion that nowadays the conscription should be considered as obligatory and prestigious due to some reasons mentioned below.
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To conclude, I would say that I totally disagree with the idea that young people must be conscripted on a compulsory basis. According to mentioned above Suggestion
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