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The crime rate amoung teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries. Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

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Nowadays illegal
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Nowadays, illegal
 acts among youngsters has increased substantially in many territories.There must be several reasons and solutions for
this
 matter which it will be discussed
through out
all the way through
throughout
this
 essay
such
 as social media and
paucity
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the paucity
 of parental control that I think it can be solved with
supervison
management by overseeing the performance or operation of a person or group
supervision
 of parents and holding
counceling
something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
 sessions. On the one hand
,
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social media is playing a vital role in today's modern life
,
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thus
 making it more challenging for fathers and mothers to manage their children
,
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because they can see a lot of
contents
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content
 which can make them do undesired things
such
 as delinquency.
For instance
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there was a teenager that held up a gathering
in
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at
 their house through online social
media which
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media, which
 it ended up for him to be arrested
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because of drugs that other members of the gathering brought with them to use throughout the party
.
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On the other hand
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there are solutions to deal with
this
 problem that made many of people exhausted.One of which could be more
supervison
management by overseeing the performance or operation of a person or group
supervision
 of
parents especially
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parents, especially
 on social media by means of enrolling their children to sports activities and other helpful activities which can make them busy.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
,
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,
holding
counceling
something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
 sessions
in
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at
 some point can make them back to normal life with the help of
psycologists
a scientist trained in psychology
psychologists
psychologist
sociologists
 and other experts
.
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 To sum up
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parents or guardians should be more aware of what their children do so that in case of troubles they can manage the situation and help them out
.
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under
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Under
 these circumstances teenagers could be more
knowledgable
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
 about their precious life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dramatically
  • Parental supervision
  • Peer pressure
  • Economic inequality
  • Desensitize
  • Aggressive behavior
  • Disenfranchisement
  • Substance abuse
  • Gang culture
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