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Topic: Some people think that natural disasters are inevitable, while others argue they can be avoided.

#topic #people #disasters
On a daily basis natural
disasters
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disaster
 occur occasionally.
last
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Last
 night
this
 incident happened in my area. The natural disaster change around
territory
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the territory
 of Bukhara
that is
 to say several parts of Bukhara were damaged by the natural disaster.
For example
: some trees broke, fruits spilled, some roofs of houses flew away, buildings were damaged and other different things were harmed. Some people think that natural disasters are inevitable, while others argue they can be avoided. That's true. Because there are both sides of the theme.
Thus
, now I bring up
this
 subject. The
first
 important thing I should mention is that natural disasters are a danger to process. Without a shadow of doubt, I can say that most of the people come up with that natural disasters very dangerous and inevitable.
truth
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Truth
 to be told, I think so too.
On the other hand
, we should not worry
this
 incident. In other word we could
avoided
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avoid
this
 incident
that is
 to say we should watch
whether
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weather
 forecast from on TV and we should take precautions against
this
 situation. In the light of these facts, my point is that we must be prepared for any disasters that may occur at any time. As I have mentioned
above we
Accept comma addition
above, we
 ought to always protect ourselves from various disasters!!
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