Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? There is nothing that young people can teach older people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

# Some people said that " You should never stop learning because life never stops teaching".
Thus there
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Thus, there
are a
lot
of unstudied things that we should learn and accustom others too. Herein age does not matter, the knowledge
is the
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is, the
more crucial that to be studied. But some people think there are nothing that young people can teach to older people. Personally, I absolutely disagree with
this
statement and in
this
essay I will explain my disagreement with some details.
Initially
, there
are
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is
a
lot
of knowledge that young people can teach to older people. Personally, we must never give up learning because life never stops teaching and we can learn
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a quantity of money
sums
from each other. Herein age does not matter because young people might know more than older or they know some
informations
a message received and understood
information
that older people do not know.
For
instance young
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instance, young
people are more active. Young adults climb mountains, ski and spend time in
garden
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the garden
a garden
. There is not secret that some older people are very passive. They can feel tired, sore or if they cannot do
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unmotivated quickly. It is vital to learn from
younger generation
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a younger generation
the younger generation
that movements does not needy for stay active that boring gym or tedious yoga. There a
lot
of
funny
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fun
ways to stay active.
Additionally
, now we are living in a technology century and day by day it becomes to a peak. And we can say that
younger generation
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the younger generation
is
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occurring
occurred
the most crucial part of people who use technology. And youth can teach using technology to connect. There are a
lot
of social media websites,
such
as telegram,
instagram
,
facebook
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Facebook
, twitter and so on. They are easy to make a friend, gives a
lot
of news and helps to spend time awesome with them. Kids or grandkids can teach how to use them. And
then
older people can make new friends
,
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,
or they can news easily and they spend
time significant
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significant time
time signing
time signing signing
. On the whole, there is no matter who teach us, the knowledge is more crucial to us. Everyone can teach
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someone with an assured and ingratiating manner
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from their experience and herein age is trivial.
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