some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it as legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
Nowadays, they there are some regulations which make
due to
life style
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lifestyle
changes
we have more Add a comma
changes,
waste
in comparison with the past. One of the best methods to manage waste
is recycling. Some people
assert that the only way to increase recycling is to make regulations, but I suppose this
is a mutual responsibility., In other words
, both people
and governments
are responsible in this
regard. Firstly
, I think we can increase recycling by raising making
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apply
people
's well
awareness about the adverse effects of Correct word choice
apply
wastes
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waste
to
nature and Change preposition
on
the
Correct article usage
apply
wild life
. Correct your spelling
wildlife
For example
, there are many documentaries which
show that how marine animals suffer from Correct pronoun usage
apply
plastics
Change the noun form
plastic
waste
. Also
, we can increase the proportion of recycling by encouraging people
to sort out their litters
from the source. Fix the agreement mistake
litter
Also
, in Germany in every house
we can find diverse bins each of which in each house. Each of these bins is allocated to a special type of Add a comma
house,
waste
;,
one for wet ones, Change the punctuation
;
,
and
the other for dry ones and one for glasses. In addition, I think Correct word choice
apply
governments
play a vital role in recycling. They should make/introduce the rules to oblige industries to produce recyclable products. For example
, in many developed countries manufacturers should be committed that their products have the capability to be reused, otherwise
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,
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not
be allowed to produce and sell them. In addition, in some European countriesRewrite the sentence
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,
people
responsible about
their Change preposition
for
wastes
. Fix the agreement mistake
waste
For instance
, in Finland
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Finland,
people
are responsible till their waste
is recycled. In conclusion, I strongly believe that both governments
and people
should assume responsibility to address
the Change preposition
for addressing
waste
recycling issue, so we extremely require
to developWrong verb form
required
the
culture of recycling Correct article usage
a
besides
making strict rules. In other words, the more cooperation between governments
and people
, the less wastes
.Fix the agreement mistake
waste
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
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