some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it as legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays,
due to
life style
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changes
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we have more
waste
in comparison with the past. One of the best methods to manage
waste
is recycling. Some
people
assert that the only way to increase recycling is to make regulations, but I suppose
this
is a mutual responsibility.,
In other words
, both
people
and
governments
are responsible in
this
regard.
Firstly
, I think we can increase recycling by raising
making
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people
's
well
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awareness about the adverse effects of
wastes
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to
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nature and
the
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wild life
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wildlife
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.
For example
, there are many documentaries
which
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show that how marine animals suffer from
plastics
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waste
.
Also
, we can increase the proportion of recycling by encouraging
people
to sort out their
litters
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from the source.
Also
, in Germany in every
house
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we can find diverse bins each of which in each house. Each of these bins is allocated to a special type of
waste
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one for wet ones,
and
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the other for dry ones and one for glasses. In addition, I think
governments
play a vital role in recycling. They should make/introduce the rules to oblige industries to produce recyclable products.
For example
, in many developed countries manufacturers should be committed that their products have the capability to be reused,
otherwise
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they
don't
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not
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be allowed to produce and sell them. In addition, in some European countries
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there are some regulations which make
people
responsible
about
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their
wastes
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.
For instance
, in
Finland
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people
are responsible till their
waste
is recycled. In conclusion, I strongly believe that both
governments
and
people
should assume responsibility
to address
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the
waste
recycling issue, so we extremely
require
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to develop
the
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culture of recycling
besides
making strict rules. In other words, the more cooperation between
governments
and
people
, the less
wastes
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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