Overpopulation of urban area has led to numerous problems. Identift one ot two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems.

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Over the past few decades, urban cities are going to densely populated. Due to
this
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reason, people living in these areas
have faced
Suggestion
have been faced
with tough issues in their every
dat
time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis
day
life. And
also
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mant
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
meant
measures would be taken by them and governments.
To begin
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with, a couple of main problems is air pollution and traffic congestion in these cities because
amount
Suggestion
the amount
of private cars on the roads and factories have
negative impact
Suggestion
a negative impact
on these places. To solve
this
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problem
allertly
in mentally perceptive and responsive way
alertly
might be put in strict rules.
For instance
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, local councils and governments could make it more difficult for car drivers
to use
Suggestion
use
their car only allowing certain vehicles in city areas on certain days. A similar system has been running in London for some time, and has resulted in fewer vehicles on the roads.
Moreover
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, improving availability of public transport system and installing bus lanes throughout the city might encourage people to adopt buses and trains by offering
lower price
Suggestion
lower prices
a lower price
and expanding the timetable.
Secondly
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, another problem is that cities being excess populated do not have enough
infrastracture
the basic structure or features of a system or organization
infrastructure
such
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as hospitals, accommodations and education for all. These kind of inadequacy
cause
Suggestion
causes
a gap between the rich and the poor. If governments take precautions and give everyone equal rights, people living these cities may live in peace. To sum up, people and governments have
responsible
Suggestion
responsibility
for
thse
plural of "this"
these
problems and they should solve out together while living in more crowded places. If they not, they might tackle with unsolvable issues.

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