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Some people think that changing people’s attitude to other countries and cultures is an important factor in reducing world poverty. Others, however, feel that the most important method is trade. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is undeniable that many people have an idea of shifting people's attitude to other countries and cultures is a significant
way
 in decreasing
world
poverty
 while others think trade is the most important
method
 to fall down the
world
poverty
. From my point of view, I think these two ideas have benefits in their own
way
, described in the following paragraph. Changing people's attitude to other countries and
culture
 is an essential factory because when we learned about the different countries and
culture
 with opened heart to understand and ready to make friends.
Therefore we
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Therefore, we
 can make a
world
 more unity by our friendship.
Additionally we
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Additionally, we
 have to learn how to respect and willing to understand the people from different
culture
 to avoid
culture
 shock that could happen.
Although
 friendship is the best
method
 to reducing
world
poverty
. Trading is
also
 a good
method
 too. Every country can make the profit with trading. It's made them want to trade and want to connect to other countries.
However
, they can trade in their country, but they will get the thing that non familiar than what they have because they live in the same land that might have same geographic. Trading with other countries will gain them many different things they want especially a profit. To conclude, These two
method
Suggestion
methods
 have their own
way
 of making the
world
 unity, But they
also
 have their
way
 of benefit. Friendship may help reduce the
world
poverty
. In contrary, it is undeniable that human need money and profit and trading could give them. A different
method
 can process the different result.
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