Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

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In the era of the sedentary

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

we choose the

beat

the supreme effort one can make

best

and

possible way

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a possible way

possible ways

to get lots

oof

connects a noun with the preceding word

money in future.

Therefore one

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Therefore, one

of the

reason

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reasons

should be there that learner

choose

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chooses

the study abroad due to the study and settle

into

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the foreign country to earn huge package of the money. In the

begning

the event consisting of the start of something

beginning

of the world so many people can migrate from one country or one region

in the direction of

another region for their better

life

However trend

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However, trend

should be

same but

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same, but

change is that now youngster can move for their

further

study due to the

chane

cause to change; make different; cause a transformation

change

in the

life

style and

offcourse

to live the sedentary

life style

a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes

lifestyle

For instance

aacordingly

(sentence connectors) because of the reason given

accordingly

to the research of

american

of or relating to the United States of America or its people or language or culture

American

society in

america

North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776

America

most of the learner

migrate

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migrates

from the different country who were

stteled

established or decided beyond dispute or doubt

settled

steeled

stalled

down there and give the impact on the economy. Because the native of

america

America

were jobless but

forienger

a person who comes from a foreign country; someone who does not owe allegiance to your country

foreigner

get

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gets

the job.

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student moved from to

earned

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earn

the money as well. I

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that

it is

it's

to the same degree (often followed by 'as')

possible that they will migrate from native nation to the foreign

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Prediction or recommendation

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

183 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

you have been offered a job overseas that you applied for. Write a letter to your friend who is already knows about that job as well. .Tell what kind of job it is .explain why you applied for this job .ask your friend about the country

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In many countries, people now wear Western-style dresses such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative development?