In many countries today, parents are able to choose to send their children to single-sex schools or co-educational schools. Some people think that children going to single-sex schools have disadvantages later in life. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays,
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arents have the option of sending their children to single-
sex
schools or mixed schools and it is thought by some that children attending single-
sex
schools will face some problems in the future.In my opinion,
I
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,
completely agree with
this
point of view.It is obviously that children going to single-
sex
schools will not only lose out on communication skills with other
g
ender but
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gender, but
also
the ability to consider something from different angles when they grow up. F
irsty,
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Firstly
First
s
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,
tudents who learning in
gender
specific schools have l
ittle
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fewer
few
interactions with the opposite
sex
.
This
can be a challenge for them in their future because they will definitely have to work in u
nisexual working environment
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a unisexual working environment
unisexual working environments
the unisexual working environment
where teamwork with people of the opposite
gender
is indispensable.
This
would have a negative impact on their performance as well as that of others since they are lack of experience of understanding and i
nteracting the other
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interacting with the other
gender
.
Moreover
,
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o-ed schools help to reduce the prejudice against the opposite
sex
because boys will find that a girl can be as brave as any boy and that gossiping is
also
common among boys.
Secondly
,
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,
ixed
gender
schools are beneficial for children as they expose them to different viewpoints.Since male and female have varied perspectives on issues and it results in the difference of handling scenarios.Co-education allows children to have opportunities to be involved in and gain an understanding of the opposite
gender
's opinions.
For example
, it was statistically proven in an educational journal in Nigeria in 2012 that most versatile youth in their respective places of employment are products of the mixed
gender
academy, they
also
tend to have stable emotions no matter the pressure from the opposite
sex
. In conclusion, even though parents these days tend to send their child to single-
sex
schools due to the future’s drawbacks of unisexual schools, I believe there is a lot to be gained by enrolling their children in a co-ed school
such
as improving mutual understanding with their opposite
sex
counterparts and the faculty of thought and reason.

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