Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the recent era, the people are
adoping
choose and follow; as of theories, ideas, policies, strategies or plans
adopting
the scientific attitude in their lives.
Few
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Fewer
masses hold that the
by gone
past events to be put aside
bygone
days have not any effect on their present days
,
Accept space
,
but others are opposite to
this
view. I firmly stand by the former idea. In my coming paragraphs, I shall shed light on the both sides and give my own opinion. On an agreement side
,
Accept space
,
the past is
important
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an important source
source
of learning from the mistakes and correct in future days
.
Accept space
.
To illustrate, the human being
learn
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learns
many and various lessons from their earlier rainy days
also
the masses do not repeat
same situation
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the same situation
again which slip down their
life
.
Accept space
.
Moreover
, the experience is a sole
source
to upgrade the various skills in the
life
.
Accept space
.
From the gone days, the mankind
learn
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learns
about the attitude of the people about various situations, which they
already faced
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have already faced
.
However
, other humans believe that the people should forget all the situations with the passage of the time. The earlier days do not give any encouragement to the human being, because there are minimal chances of repeating
same situation
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the same situation
in the
life
span.
For example
, sometime the masses may face financial scarcity, but it is not compulsory that the same conditions repeat in the present or coming days
.
Accept space
.
So
,
Accept space
,
the past is
only
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the only source
source
of discouragement for the people. Apart from
this
, the
life
blesses us with various new chances
,
Accept space
,
it is important to welcome the new opportunities
instead
of stick with the past situations. I
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
that the past days play a vital to spike the present of the human being
.
Accept space
.
So
,
Accept space
,
the earlier days
source
of inspiration.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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