The graph below shows the number of books read by men and women at Burnaby Public Library from 2011 to 2014.
The line graph illustrates the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
books
read by Use synonyms
male
and Fix the agreement mistake
males
female
at the Burnaby Library in four years 2011, 2012, 2013, and 2014.
Fix the agreement mistake
females
Overall
, the line graph shows a gradual increase except Linking Words
number
of women decreased Change the article
the number
from
Change preposition
in
Linking Words
last
Correct article usage
the last
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
in the given period. It is evident that women read more than Use synonyms
the
men, Correct article usage
apply
however
, Linking Words
last
Linking Words
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
year
it changed Use synonyms
a
male reader number increased, whilst Correct article usage
the
female
number plunged.
With regards to the Correct article usage
the female
amount
of male readers, it began at around 3000 Change the quantifier
number
books
in 2011 and it increased a Use synonyms
merely
five hundred, which was 3500 in 2012. Following that, it soared Replace the word
mere
at
approximately 10000 in 2013 and it reached 14000 Change preposition
to
books
in the final Use synonyms
year
of the period given.
Women, meanwhile, it was 2000 Use synonyms
books
more than men at the beginning of the figure. Female reading numbers Use synonyms
was
increased gradually in the following two years (2012, 2013), 8000 and 10000 Unnecessary verb
apply
books
, respectively before Use synonyms
dropped
Wrong verb form
dropping
sharp
Change the adjective
sharply
at
8000 in the Change preposition
to
last
Linking Words
year
Use synonyms
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