Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves. Some people think this is a good thing. While others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, many companies sponsoring sports to advertise themselves.
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way it is good. Because many people in the world watch Sports irrespective of age and status. So, it reaches to till common man. In earlier days the advertisement is in a different way like advertising by artists, children and animals. Now students, elders even housewives watching sports. It is a common medium to reach all.
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, there are many advantages as we know the coin has both the sides. There are few disadvantages as well.
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a company sponsoring the sport and the category of people are not interested in watching that sport, there is a possibility of losing the people's interest. Despite of the above mentioned example, there are several scenarios persists as we can't catch everybody's attention by applying the same methodology. Ideally, advertising should be done in multiple ways to reach all kinds of people in the society.
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won't agree with the statement that, by sponsoring sports one could catch the attention of all humans. The advertising should be in numerous ways to reach the audience.

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