Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With rapid of
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With rapid
techonolgy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
development that advertising industry has
also
been
appear
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appearing
in worldwide corners, whether or not advertisement will be affects to citizen being different
of
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for
individuals has become a widely debated topic. Many believed that whatever
teenages
a juvenile between the onset of puberty and maturity
teenagers
teen-agers
teenage
or adults have always
refers
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referred
from advertising on
box
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the box
a box
other maintain that kind of advertising form just provides a few of suggests to consumers it not means people suppose to totally copy by advertising. Given that people has been
began
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begun
to learn
dress
up based on advertising and a
part
of
sucessful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
company’s are being mainstream by effect of advertising. I strongly agree that advertising will be effective impacts
to
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of
customer of minds. In
term
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terms
of clothes style of
teenages
any movable possession (especially articles of clothing)
things
, on the same street, people cans look as some
dress
up of persons for four or five times in sense that almost people were affected by
avertising
a public promotion of some product or service
advertising
.
It
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It's
just like that advertising
want
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wants
to told
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to tell
to be told
to
audience
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the audience
what is the right
dress
up. Lets most
part
of consumers
dress
up as
silmilar
marked by correspondence or resemblance
similar
.
For instance
,
surver
undergo or be subjected to
suffer
from a Hong Kong University by students that most common of brands which is Nike. People
had weared
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were wearing
had wore
wore
that brand at daily that
rougly
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
roughly
excessed
the right to enter
accessed
1000 times. It
meants
mean or intend to express or convey
meant
means
a lot of people had effected from Television and society media. Regarding
moblie
migratory
mobile
phone,
three most popular
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the three most popular
of
cell-phone
a hand-held mobile radiotelephone for use in an area divided into small sections, each with its own short-range transmitter/receiver
cellphone
which are Apple, Sammany and Sony company’s
consequently
, most
part
of city people’s has often used those brands.
Instead
, fewer users just used a not the same brand that will be
stranged
caused to be unloved
estranged
strange
from other
people
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peoples
outlooks. To be honest, it
has been became
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became
has become
is becoming
becomes
a sort of morbid state which is deeply
controling
able to control or determine policy
controlling
people chose for products. As
example
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an example
examples
of BBC News report that Apple In.
c had
a family of Afroasiatic tonal languages (mostly two tones) spoken in the regions west and south of Lake Chad in north central Africa
Chad
C had
sold out a mass of number for a year that approximately 100000 into 150000 stocks. Having discussed that most
part
of
dress
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the dress
up
form
a giver or sender
from
just
accroding
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
by certain of
large company standard
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the large company standard
that is
significantly
impact
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impacted
impacting
to people thinks and most of
company marketing channel
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the company marketing channel
is having similar on certain tricks. I firmly believed that the advertising industry had severe influences to consumers.
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