Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think this is good. Other think that face-to-face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Internet has been the most popular things in the world. Every person has known internet and most of them can't be separate with their phones.
This
cyberspace has been an addict for everyone.
Therefore
, many of us argue that World Wide Web is giving more bad effects. So,
this
essay would deliver some reasons and effects of surfing the wide web. The
first
thing we should know that cyberspace make us closer to each other.
This
connection makes people feel there is no barriers between country or time. We can contact everyone easily in
this
era.
Moreover
,
this
connection brings us to a lot of new friendships because of its ease. By
this
connection we
also
can get a lot of new information that could help us in developing ourselves. Despite all of the positive changes. After all, every improve has its own loss. The internet makes us more individuals and less care about the environment.
For example
, most of the task now in school using a technology
such
as laptop, notebook, and others.
This
task can be easily done by surfing the web,
subsequently
student won't need to discuss with their classmates because they had done the task easily.
This
effect the face to face interaction which is really good to build the social behaviour of a person. Even if the wide web made them interact with video calls, it doesn't give the same influence. Cyberspace has its own good influence if we use it according to our needs. Unless if we get the phone addiction too much it will destroy our social behave and made us individuals.
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