“Are teachers putting their students more pressure during pandemic?”

While
healthcare
Suggestion
health care
workers struggle to protect the nations from deadly virus, teachers
also
become
frontline
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Frontline
to save education for us, but their efforts have been misinterpreted by students as pressure because of assignments and tasks. That’s true because staying home is indeed distressing to me as a college student. I miss interacting and eating out with my friends. I force myself to take those stressful online classes which are often disrupted by slow internet connection. I miss to submit my assignment because of self-inexperience with Google Classroom. Despite having many difficulties during pandemic, my teachers keep assigning me tons of assignments and homework that I sometimes wonder whether he/she feel empathetic to us or not.
Then
I realized my hardship is nothing compared to teachers’.
Economy
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The economy
is now at stake that teachers might concern about family financially and mentally;
however
, they are committed to deliver knowledge and fulfil duties for the students. At
this
time of crisis, e-learning is introduced expeditiously by the schools, and our education savers try finding new teaching methods to ensure learning quality. I believe video conferencing doesn’t give us the same vibe because students are asked to mute themselves visually and vocally. Imagine if you were them, how would you feel giving
lecture
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a lecture
but not seeing your students? Concerning about the students, they even always ask us questions and for participation. At the end of class, they always leave us words of appreciation and encouragement. I believe they assign us
tasks
Suggestion
the tasks
for reasons, keeping track
on
Suggestion
of
our academic performance and saving you for
purpose
Suggestion
a purpose
the purpose
. To the core, my experiences with e-learning have proved me three important lessons, integration, technological adaptation, and inspiration.
Instead
of complaining, we can be productive completing the tasks, which can make
you
of you or yourself
your
teachers smile. Salute every virus fighter for their dedication and sacrifice!

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