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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.

#people #teacher
In our modern life, one of the most important aspect is education. Every person le
arn s
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learns
omething new according to age, experience and knowledge. Some people prefer self-study, but I think it is always better to have te
acher o
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a teacher
r guide to study.
First
 of all, study with professional teachers at schools or educational ce
nters,
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centres
much more effective than learn by ow
nselves.
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own selves
Because they have many years of experience and in accordance with
this
, teachers use an individual approach to each student in order to find and show their best sides.
For example
, if you ca
n not c
can not
cannot
hoose what university to enter or in what direction to move in the future, teachers will help you by weighing the pros and cons.
Se
cond important point i
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The second important point
s emotional state. All teachers give advice to students not only in their education life, but
also
 in pe
rsonal.
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personality
person
They always support, help and motivate children with words like: ,,
Ne
Accept space
,
,
ver give up'' ,,
U
Accept space
,
,
c
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
an do it'' ,,
U
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,
a
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
re the best one''. All students will inspired by
this
 kind of words and buckle down to harder st
udeing.
To sum up, all our teachers which we met, play ma
jor role i
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a major role
n our li
fe a
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lives
nd help to explain, check and fix our mistakes.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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