the two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992
The charts illustrate information about male and
females
employment proportions in the UK in 1992 divided into 2 groups, manual and non-manual occupations with 3 broad categories in each. Change the noun form
female
Overall
, a slight majority of men doing manual work is greater than females
. Also
, for both sexes, management and professional careers are popular while
general labor
is a small fraction.
Looking in more detail, in Change the spelling
labour
the
non-manual occupations, it was preferred by Correct article usage
apply
females
. Although
females
had the highest percentage on
the clerk, Change preposition
of
accounted
for 31%, it was taken only six Wrong verb form
accounting
by
males. Professional positions were dominated by men, approximately 36%, Change preposition
apply
while
women's percentage was just under a third
. Other non-manual, not specified, for both sexes were a small minority.
Moving to manual employment, males doing manual work had nearly the same percentage as non-manual. There was a difference in Craftsmanship between both genders which made for 24% for men compared to women with just 3%. Moreover
, general laborers
and other types of manuals were no significant differences between males' and Change the spelling
labourers
females
’ percentages. For labor
works,Change the spelling
labour
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