Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Nowdays

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Now days

many people visit to those adventure places where situations are not good

such

as some risky deserts

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however

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However

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there are some pros and cons to visit

such

risky place In

this

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an analytic or interpretive literary composition

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issue

we discuss both of them. Looking at

positive side

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the positive side

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advantures

willing to undertake or seeking out new and daring enterprises

adventurous

adventure

acitivity

any specific behavior

activity

inculcates some of essential skills in tourist it makes the people risk taker. Which is important to

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surpass

surpassed

in any field of career

Additionally it

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Additionally, it

can teach

human being

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human beings

a human being

to survive in toughest time in

life

. Eventually make people bold to handle trails and tribulations of

life

For example

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a survey by a well known international tourist agency has

revelead

make visible

revealed

that people who visit

risky palace

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risky place

the risky palace

the risky palace the risky palace

for fun are the fastest learner and

most successful

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more successful

in their lives. Looking at the negative side

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life

is an unpredictable if any accident at any adventure palace occurs the chance of survival are very low sometimes tourist may get

injuried

harmed

injured

injuries

at the time. It may lead to the death

For instance

. In the

last

year a car in an open zoo in

africa

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Africa

forest was attacked by five lions which took several lives

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Moreover, by

experiencing

such

horrible incidents at some stage of

life

. People start to get

scard which

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scared, which

scared which

scored which

scarred which

lead to various

kind

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kinds

of phobia which can only be treated by medical help

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To conclude going for an

advantures

willing to undertake or seeking out new and daring enterprises

adventurous

adventure

tour has its uncountable

advantage but

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advantage, but

the same time it is very risky

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Hence

people should be careful for

there

of them or themselves

their

safety if they are in

such

place.

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