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Artificial Intelligence will soon replace teachers in the classroom. Do you agree with this statement?

#intelligence #teachers #classroom
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According to the people, teachers in the classroom will be replaced in the near future by artificial intelligence. I disagree with that statement because
technology
 is merely an augmentation to a
teacher
. It can help the process of learning, but it certainly cannot replace the role of the
teacher
.
Although
technology
 can make learning
easily but
Accept comma addition
easily, but
 that education is
also
 provided by
teacher
Suggestion
the teacher
. Teachers
are have
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are having
 to aid students in various vital factors
such
 as evaluation, guidance and motivation which certainly cannot be provided by a
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
.
For example
, Photomath is an application that can help us to solve math problems by utilizing a
cellphone
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cell phone
 camera.
However
, it is no substitute for a
teacher
 and it cannot provide adequate help to Mathematic learners because it does not explain how that math
problems
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problem
 can be resolved and cannot help students improve their skills. It is significant that we remember, no matter how good the
technology
 is, the physical existence of a
teacher
 is still needed by students in the teaching-learning process. The main role of a
teacher
 is not only teaching which conveys material to students, but
also
 as an educator who teaches
also
 about character education to these students as the
technology
 cannot teach these human skills. In conclusion,
technology
 hasn't reached a stage where teachers in the classroom can be replaced by artificial intelligence in the upcoming years because human skills cannot be taught by
technology
.

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