You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Ms Rachel, Thank you much for offering

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a huge opportunity in your renowned organisation. I am glad to join your team and work under your supervision

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my brighter future. I am writing

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letter to inform you that, due to some unavoidable circumstances in my personal life I am unable to start my refresher training session on

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November 15th. I wish I could explain

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problem in detail. The concerning aspects for me at the work front are, I may sound a little unprofessional for management at an initial stage on one hand and destroy my

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impression within the team members.I am hoping to get your support in

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critical situation, which may help me to secure

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position in the company I would request

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kindly postpone my joining date by one week, if possible. I am happy to accept the offer letter if the date is rescheduled to 21st November

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of 15th. Thanks in advance for the consideration and looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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sincerely, James

Sat May 02 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

178 words

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You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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