You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date. Task: Write a letter to your new boss, explaining your situation, expressing your concern and suggesting solution.

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Dear Ms Rachel, Thank you much for offering

such

a huge opportunity in your renowned organisation. I am glad to join your team and work under your supervision

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my brighter future. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that, due to some unavoidable circumstances in my personal life I am unable to start my refresher training session on

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November 15th. I wish I could explain

you

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this

problem in detail. The concerning aspects for me at the work front are, I may sound a little unprofessional for management at an initial stage on one hand and destroy my

first

impression within the team members.I am hoping to get your support in

this

critical situation, which may help me to secure

this

position in the company I would request

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kindly postpone my joining date by one week, if possible. I am happy to accept the offer letter if the date is rescheduled to 21st November

instead

of 15th. Thanks in advance for the consideration and looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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sincerely, James

Sat May 02 2020

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8 paragraphs

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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