The graph shows the impact of vaccinations on the incidence of whooping cough, a childhood illness, between 1940 and 1990 in Britain. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates the influence of grafting on the falling of whooping cough childhood illness from 1940 to 1990 in Britain.
Overall
, at the beginning of 50 years
period, the number of people, who got this
disease was increasingly hight
, whilst the end showed the opposite result.
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high
According to
the details, that are given in the diagram, it can be seen that particularly in 1940 people infected with it were between 40000 and 60000. After some years
this
amount started to increase and grew up to 180000. Somewhere around in
1945, Change preposition
apply
this
quantity has
decreased and Unnecessary verb
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was
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during
some Change preposition
for
years
.
However
, until about 1955 quantum of these people again began to incline more and more. Nevertheless
, after
this
time, the summa of them slowly fell. Until finally
declined to 60 years
. Between 1960 and 1990 were
some worsening, but generally, it was waved.Correct subject-verb agreement
was
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
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