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In some offices, employees work in enclosed workstations or cubicles. Other offices have a more open design, in which there are no walls separating employees from their coworkers. Which type of arrangement do you think is most effective? Explain, giving reasons to support your answer.

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Many of the
office
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 goers would consider the workplace as their
second
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 home, since they spend most of the time here,
second
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 to their living space. The way the workplace is designed plays a very important role as it may boost or undermine the morale of its employees. Workplaces must be carefully designed to meet the needs of its employees,
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, I consider an open
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office
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 to be more effective than a traditional cabin or cubicle
work
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 place. For many, workstation act as a switch which mentally prepares them to start working, similar to a bed which makes people sleepy when they lay down over it.
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 a proper design is a must. The traditional cubicle or enclosed
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 workstations,
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, provide sufficient space to
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 and
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, provide some privacy which helps many to effectively concentrate on their
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.
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 layouts are effective in engineering consultancy, where an engineer needs to stay focus on his
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. In spite of these benefits, the traditional design may appear dull and even have a negative impact on its employees moral.
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, many have opted to design their
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 spaces with little or no walls,
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 making the
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 appear bigger and giving it a modern look. Unlike the traditional layout, it serves as a great place for co-workers to have group discussions, as there is nothing separating them from each other and with some good interior works, can actually help boost their creativeness. As many architects have agreed to incorporate certain colours, patterns and arrangement
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 which helps the occupants to be more productive in their
work
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. To summarise, the layout of any
office
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, largely depends on its purpose; cubicle
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 offices are better suited for
work
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 which requires steady focus by the performer.
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, the advantages
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 as increased productivity, creativity and ease of having a group discussion makes the modern open
style
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 offices much more effective than the enclosed workstation offices.

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