Nowadays people can buy a large variety of household goods, more than ever before in most countries in the world. Is this a good or bad development? Give your opinion and examples.

There has been a significant increase in the spending capacity of people. Due to which, they are spending more and more on daily electronic and consumable items. In my opinion,
this
is a positive change and it is happening for good.
This
essay will focus on the main effects of
this
development.
Firstly
, people can now afford all
exhorbitant
greatly exceeding bounds of reason or moderation
exorbitant
stuff required to make life comfortable due to high paid jobs.
This
is evident from the rising number of vacancies in the
coroporate
of or belonging to a corporation
corporate
sector.
Moreover
, spending a large amount of money on items like refrigerator, air conditioner, washing
maching
any mechanical or electrical device that transmits or modifies energy to perform or assist in the performance of human tasks
machine
machines
and microwave provides a satisfying experience of doing day to day work and makes life easy.
For instance
, my mother used to wash clothes with
hands but
Accept comma addition
hands, but
now a brilliant piece of machine has made her work way too easy.
Thus
, these products make ones work less tedious and interesting to do.
Furthermore
,
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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