Many old building protected by law are part of a nation history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. how important is to maintain old building? should history stand in way of progress?

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

undeniable that every

nations

Suggestion

nation

has historical places as well as old building

such

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as temples,

history

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realted

being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

rated

building.

Cultural bulding

Suggestion

Cultural buildings

Cultural building

The cultural building

Cultural beading

and so on,

thus

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, some people

beleive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that historical houses should be pressured to protect

history

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while

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

think that old structure ought to be

replace

Suggestion

replaced

by modern on which I elaborate my notions in upcoming fragments with rational conclusion. To embark upon,

first

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and

formost

ranking above all others

foremost

reson

a rational motive for a belief or action

reason

reasons

behind

this

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issue are historic

bulilding

a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place

building

provide knowledge about past time, tradition generation which

helps

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will help

in present time

for

Suggestion

teach today's generation about our past.

Furthermore

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, monuments and historic buildings have been fascinate

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place

Suggestion

placed

among tourists from all around the world which

help

Suggestion

helps

economical

Suggestion

economize

respectively.

Moreover

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history

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teach

Suggestion

teaches

individuals about past and guide them

Suggestion

into

the future.

Additionally

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goverment

Suggestion

the government

government

built new building in the

place

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of very did building which are dangerous for travellers as well as their resident. Moving

further

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, combination of old and modern building has become

captivate

Suggestion

captivated

and

attraction

Suggestion

attract

for

Suggestion

their nation is a result, the become

poplular

regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public

popular

as a

place

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of visitors destination

places

Accept comma addition

places, for

for instance

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, in India, Taj Mahal are a part of fascinate

place

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all over the world as well as right seekers visited

india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

for watching the historical

place

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this

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contructed

act in opposition to

counteracted

contradicted

contrasted

by a king for

this

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wife as a sign of the love.

Thus

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, it can

inferred

Suggestion

infer

that, there is no doubt that protecting old houses and buildings are imperative we learn about our

history

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as well as know about other

nations

Suggestion

nation's

history

Use synonyms

histroical

Suggestion

historic

historical

buildings and so on.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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Many old building protected by law are part of a nation history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones. how important is to maintain old building? should history stand in way of progress?

Fully explain your ideas

The only way to improve safety in our road is to give stricter punishment for driving offenses to what extent do you agree or disagree?

more and more countries are making university education completely free for their citizens. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The amount of sport, shown on television every week has increased significantly and this is having an impact on live sport events. Do you think the benefits of having more televised sport are greater than the disadvantages?

Some people believe that celebrating personal events is a waste of money. Others feel that these celebrations play an important role in the lives of individuals and in society as a whole. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.