Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Dressing in the workplace

is depended

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depends

on

organizations policies

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the organization's policies

organization's policies

organizations' policies

and sometimes may be considered as a rule, especially in government organizations. It does not mean the quality of

employees

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employees'

work is not important. But generally

dress

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codes in many occupations can not influence their performance and I agree with

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opinion.

whereas

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Whereas

I believe the staffs should choose their cloths in proportional to their jobs.

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, there are two strong reasons about some people think what the employees wear can not impressive their productivity.

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Firstly because

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Firstly, because

of developing of different type of jobs, attire policies have not visual expression on the final efficiencies of companies and commitment would be playing the main role.

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Secondly some

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Secondly, some

jobs

have not dealing

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have not been dealing

have not dealt

have not been dealt

as face to face with their clients and handle their works just by sitting in their rooms,

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networker

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Networker

network

networking

or wed designer are placed in

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group.

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, according to studies, 61% of employees are turning in and more productive in

workplace

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the workplace

when attire is relaxed and comfortable.

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, many of people believe some positions need to special

dress

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codes, because what the wearing has

direct impact

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a direct impact

on their relations with customers. While in some jobs the uniforms have exclusive means,

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as doctors, nurses, bank staffs.

Again according

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Again, according

to study finds, 80% of people who work in a place with a

dress

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code responded that they don't find them useful. In conclusion.

a

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A

less strict

dress

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code allows people to express themselves, which can help elevate creative thinking and ideas. The people in workplace are more productive and happier when they own

choose

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choosing

chosen

their

cloths

clothing in general

clothes

.