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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person?

#success #wealth #belongings #measure #person
It is often argued that
success
 is frequently associated with richness or a high
fin
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higher
ancial status. Personally, i th
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
nk it is not the main part of
success
,
although
 there are several factors that define or make people pros
perious.
in fortunate circumstances financially; moderately rich
prosperous
     Regarding the wealth as the best indicator of
success
, over
whelming majority of
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the overwhelming majority
people probably consider a
success
 in accordance with the financial stability and they do not take into account that
pers
on cou
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the person
a person
people
ld inherit the wealth and status of their successful ancestor. As an illustrative exam
ple can be
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dynasties in which the affluence was inherited by several generations.
Therefore
,can
n
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,
ot be compared due to the presence of several factors,
such
 as health conditions , k
no
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,
wledge and dream career that make a
person
 successful in life.  
Hence
, money is not ulti
mate goal of
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the ultimate goal
an ultimate goal
every
person
.    The
success
 is explained by a number of other factors, apart from wealth.
Firstly
 , g
oo
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,
d relationship with family members and friends. Respect and support from
the
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for
m is motivate
person
 to chase the goals and keep focu
s on
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focused
them. Along with
this
 grea
m wor
the best people or things in a group
cream
grim
green
k is
also
 indi
cator of
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indicative
success
, which gives delightful feeling in life.
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dd
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In
ition to these facts, 
also
 have good health is a good combination to consider 
pers
on as
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the person
a person
people
a successful one.
Finally
 , p
eo
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,
ple whose private life and work are balanced , t
he
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y are happier than the rich individuals, who surely have money to buy anything in the world, but lack peace of mind.    Overall, it is sensible to conclude that here is vari
aty way
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
s to consider a
person
’s
success
.  Wealth is not the effective way to measure
success
 as there are many other factors like good
 relationship wit
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a good relationship
h people, health and dream job that make a
person
 successful.
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