Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, countries are developing

year

by

year

and that d

evelopmets

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

developments

are compelling people to

travel

more to other states and it is useful for countries

budget

and

money

which is collected b

y

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from

tourism

could use in m

edicine and educational way.

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the medical and educational way

medical and educational way

medical and educational ways

I believe that

tourism

has more benefits than drawbacks.

This

essay will look at some aspects to justify my viewpoint. To start with,

a

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,

number of tourists increased in many modern and historical countries after beginning technological century due to we can see that many countries reached a peak in development and it might cause to increase a

budget

of

c

ountry

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the country

a country

whereas could impact negatively for their citizens' health. A c

oronavirus

can be a prime example, there was a high demand in Russian citizens that going to the Italy

last

month due to there was a discount for some things

such

as tickets and hotel prices decreased significantly

t

hen

conjunction used in comparatives

than

most some Russians preferred going there

as a result

their some parts a

pproximetly

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

approximately

15% or 13 % came back to the Russian with a c

oronavirus.

Another drawback of

travel

is that traditional customs might be lost due to tourists.Some local people stated that their traditional cultures are not suitable to m

odern era whereas

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the modern era, whereas

the modern era whereas

cultures brought from tourists is more suitable and modern.

Then

they try to learn another

country

's custom or their style of dresses

then

they will forget their tradition

as a result

local traditions might be lost step by step.

By contrast

, opponents of

this

view point out that

tourism

could increase a

country

's

budget

significantly because every tourist spends a

pproximetly

(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

approximately

from 500 dollars to more than 5000 dollars in his or her

travel

point. A

m

oney which

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money, which

collected through

tourism

could boost a

country

's educational system and development.

For example

, America is the best region o

n

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to

travel

in the world and every

year

more than a million people come there for

travel

. We can see that USA earns a much

money

via

tourism

each

year

. It is crystal clear that American's university and medicine system are the best worldwide because USA spends more

m

oney which

Accept comma addition

money, which

collected through

tourism

to these types of systems. In conclusion,

tourism

has more benefits than drawbacks,

hence

, if countries give a more choice to come tourist. It will be more beneficial for their

budget