Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, countries are developing

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by

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and that d

evelopmets

act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining

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are compelling people to

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more to other states and it is useful for countries

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and

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which is collected b

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from

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could use in m

edicine and educational way.

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the medical and educational way

medical and educational way

medical and educational ways

I believe that

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has more benefits than drawbacks.

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essay will look at some aspects to justify my viewpoint. To start with,

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number of tourists increased in many modern and historical countries after beginning technological century due to we can see that many countries reached a peak in development and it might cause to increase a

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ountry

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the country

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can be a prime example, there was a high demand in Russian citizens that going to the Italy

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month due to there was a discount for some things

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as tickets and hotel prices decreased significantly

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most some Russians preferred going there

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their some parts a

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15% or 13 % came back to the Russian with a c

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Another drawback of

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is that traditional customs might be lost due to tourists.Some local people stated that their traditional cultures are not suitable to m

odern era whereas

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the modern era, whereas

the modern era whereas

cultures brought from tourists is more suitable and modern.

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they try to learn another

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's custom or their style of dresses

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they will forget their tradition

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local traditions might be lost step by step.

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, opponents of

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view point out that

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could increase a

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's

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significantly because every tourist spends a

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(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

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from 500 dollars to more than 5000 dollars in his or her

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point. A

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money, which

collected through

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could boost a

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's educational system and development.

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, America is the best region o

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to

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in the world and every

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more than a million people come there for

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. We can see that USA earns a much

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via

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each

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. It is crystal clear that American's university and medicine system are the best worldwide because USA spends more

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money, which

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to these types of systems. In conclusion,

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has more benefits than drawbacks,

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, if countries give a more choice to come tourist. It will be more beneficial for their

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