You have had a class discussion on space exploration. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: Should governments spend so much money on space exploration when there are problems on Earth that need to be solved? Write your composition.

Government must spend a lot of money on exploring the space because it
help
Suggestion
helps
us understand the hidden world inside galaxies, which might be the only boon to humanity after a certain period of time when all the dependence on material things and relevant sources vanish from the earth.
For example
, NASA, a space research centre
have recently launched
Suggestion
has recently launched
had recently launched
a satellite to study about the moon, where scientists landed on bare foot, found water source, and assured that it is one of the incredible place to resettle having the same climatic condition as that of earth, by spending
multimillion
Suggestion
multi million
dollars to
figureout
Suggestion
figure out
a safe place for humans after everything got
vanished
expel from a community or group
banished
from our planet sooner or later.
Secondly
, it helps bridge the gap in communication and navigation to a greater extend.
In other words
, every individual can communicate with their fellow-beings from
far end
Suggestion
the far end
of the world with much ease, could ensure the accuracy of their travel destination within fraction of seconds, and even re-align those travel routes with shortest distance possible in any device, all with the help of satellite communication.
For instance
,
nowadays majority
Suggestion
the nowadays majority
a nowadays majority
of the people are depending on
navigation
Suggestion
the navigation
by
cellphones
Suggestion
cell phones
inorder
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in order
to explore specific place, especially tourists who travelled lands to study various cultures of nations, might stuck at some point where the destination is unclear or unaware until and unless the satellite way of communication through devices was not found out.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • space exploration
  • scientific advancements
  • technology development
  • resource scarcity
  • pressing issues
  • climate change
  • financial investment
  • balanced approach
  • international cooperation
  • innovations
  • practical applications
  • stimulate economic growth
  • foster
  • societal development
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