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Traffic and housing problems can be solved if moving big companies, factories and their employees out of cities. Agree or disagree?

#traffic #companies #factories #employees #cities
Some argue that traffic bottleneck and
housing issue
Suggestion
the housing issue
housing issues
 will be resolved once giant establishments and their workers
has been relocated
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have been relocated
 to rural areas. The writer agrees to the statement as
this
 can generate jobs to people living in
provinces
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the provinces
 and at the same time elevating their standard of living. Huge companies in the developed cities
is
Suggestion
are
 the reason of people moving out of their hometown as they are being well compensated.
Therefore
, properties can move in the provincial areas wherein they could have attractive company benefits can prevent workers from travelling nor deciding to leave the place they are living. A perfect example is the province of Cavite in the Philippines, they have built the
first
 industrial compound which is composed of several manufacturing companies that has been the key to avoid skilled locals from leaving the province.
This
 has been the resolution of the government to other locations to avoid traffic congestion and lessen the population in urban cities. On the one hand, another positive impact of
establishment relocation
Accept comma addition
establishment, relocation
 is the
leveling
changing the ground level to a smooth horizontal or gently sloping surface
levelling
lifeline
labeling
 of the life of local people. If the company is giving good benefits to the workers
then
, they could live satisfactorily.
For instance
, BPO companies penetrated the small towns near Bangkok and one of the great offers they have is additional incentives plus medical insurance. Making the work rewarding monetarily helps them to stay in their hometown while raising their living status. In conclusion, big properties who can provide employment as well as amazing benefits to people in
provinces
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the provinces
 will definitely solve the house crowding and traffic issues in the main and popular cities.
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