The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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notebook

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for makers in the global market in two different years

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2006 and 2007.

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, the percentage of HP’s computer

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was

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and there was

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proportion of Fujitsu-Siemens during the show period.

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the amount of Market Share in HP, Dell and Toshiba increased, a

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of the pattern was seen in the rest of

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. In 2006, the amount of Market Share

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HP was 31.4%, which was higher

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13.8% than that of Dell. In the

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year, both the figures

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increased slightly at around 34% and 20.2% respectively. At the same time, the figure for Toshiba rose from 6.2% to 7.3%.

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there are four countries that climbed down about

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type. By 2006, the figure for Acer was 11.6, which higher

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%

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Lenovo and the following

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year both of them drop

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10.7% and 6.2%.

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, Fujitsu and

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decreased significantly

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2.5% and 3.5 respectively.