The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart illustrates the number of
computer’s
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computer
notebook
for makers in the global market in two different years Fix the agreement mistake
notebooks
are
2006 and 2007. Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, the percentage of HP’s computer notebook
was Fix the agreement mistake
notebooks
highest
and there was Correct article usage
the highest
lowest
proportion of Fujitsu-Siemens during the show period. Change the article
the lowest
Also
, while
the amount of Market Share in HP, Dell and Toshiba increased, a reverse
of the pattern was seen in the rest of Replace the word
reversal
countries
. In 2006, the amount of Market Share Correct article usage
the countries
in
HP was 31.4%, which was higher Change preposition
apply
about
13.8% than that of Dell. In the Change preposition
by about
next
year, both the figures were
increased slightly at around 34% and 20.2% respectively. At the same time, the figure for Toshiba rose from 6.2% to 7.3%. Unnecessary verb
apply
It is clear that
there are four countries that climbed down about this
type. By 2006, the figure for Acer was 11.6, which higher 5
% Change preposition
than 5
than
Lenovo and the following Change preposition
for
one
year both of them drop Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
10.7% and 6.2%. Change preposition
to
Additionally
, Fujitsu and others company
decreased significantly Fix the agreement mistake
other companies
about
2.5% and 3.5 respectively.Change preposition
by about
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